lunes, 1 de febrero de 2010

Finding the indeterminated light

Many years ago the earth had not moon, sun or people. It had just animals. They were all nocturnal because there was not light. The animals couldn't meet others and when they were walking they could crash, they could fight and eat other ones, but they couldn't see anything. The animals lived in caves and in the forest. There were all kind of animals, bears,eagles,lions,horses even tigers. All of these animals lived without knowing what other fantastic things they could find. One day in the middle of the dark one strange figure was landing in the huge forest. The animals could listen that something was moving in the forest. At the beginning they saw a small light. It was like a light of a candle. But suddenly it go away. Then, another light was shining but this one was bigger. After that, another one was bigger than the other lights, it was it was like the size of a tree. The animals could see around them some figures or things. But then they thought that they were dreaming and they didn't pay attention to what they were looking. After five minutes, from the underground a strange thing was coming out from the land. The earth started to move. It was a kind of earthquake. From the earth a strange man came to the land. It was full of light and power. The animals were scared because they never had seen light. The strange man was a god. He's name was Scorpion. He was the god of the fire. He told them that if they wanted light they had to go to the mountain of Springbell. The animals were scared because Scorpion told them that they had to go with another type of living things. These living things were humans. The animails were so confused because the humans didn't have hair in all their body. Also they couldn't talk with them. The only thing they had good was that they could walk in two feet. So they started to go to the mountain. Animals and humans were together walking to the mountain. They could see a few but it wasn't enough to see clear. Their trip will be of four days. They packed their things. Like water and food. The first day, they walked three hours and they stopped because they saw the first test. The test was to cross the river of the perdition. It was a frozen river that if you touched the ice you transformed into an ice. That was the reason of why there were many ices in the water. So all of the ices that were there, one day they were a living thing. The animals think and think and think. Suddenly one animal thought that they could make a bridge with a trunk of a tree. The humans halped to put the trunk over the river. All of them passed very fast to the other side. But one of the animals almost fall down from the bridge into the river. He was fine but he hurted his arm. All of te animals told them that he will be fine. When they passed the test they had to find a place to sleep. They founded an old cabin. All the animals and the humans slept there. The next day they woke up very early. They started their journey. They were walking but they didn't have water. They were walking very slow. Some humans carried some small animals. They stopped because they heard a voice that was saying that they had to stop when they could see a strange sign. It was similar to the face of an ugly man. They read the advertisement. It said that all living thing who wanted to pass had to fight with the dragon Dohu. When they finished to read it the floor started to separate in a big crack. A judge appeared and Dohu the dragon came to the fight. The judge read the rules and he gave time to team of the animals and humans to choose the one who would fight with the dragon. They choosed the eagle because it could fly, it was a fast animal and it was intelligent. The fight started and Dohu spitted balls of fire. The eagle flew very fast and he could bite his back and his hand. Dohu respondeed him with a knock of his tail to the face of the eagle. The eagle could stand up and killed the dragon with his powerful beak. The judge told them that they won so they could cross to the other side. They were happy because they only had to walked two more days. They founded a big cave were they slept. The next day they were going to start climbing the mountain. They were finding the form to get to the mountain. But they were so thirsty that first they had to go to get some water. They saw a lake but it was too far from the place they were. But they went to that place because they couldn't survive without water. They walked one hour to arrive to the lake. Animals and humans took some water. After two hours they were climbing to get to the top of the mountain Springbell. But before they could get there they met with a god. He was the interrogative god named Quarum. He asked soe questions to the animals and humans and they answered all of them so the god told them were was a hideout were they could sleep. Also, he gave them a map to arrive to the top of Springbell. The final day all of the animals and humans were so emocionated because they could have many light for the rest of their lifes. They were getting closer and closer when they found two roads. They choosed the right one because in the map it showed that. They went throw the road and they founded a huge door. They knocked three times and it opened. The god went there and he congratulated them because they could pass all the tests without dying. He changed his his face to a nice face and he accomplished what he promised. So he gave light to all the universe.

4 comentarios:

LisaM-simonis-rock dijo...

Ana I love your story but chek the past and the spelling part Your story makes a lot of sens.
Lisa

daniela montoya dijo...

The story is very interesting but put some pictures, you wrote animails and is animals, you wrote halped and is helped but it was very good and funny.

To dijo...

The history was very interesting check the spelling =)

Liz Miranda dijo...

Ana there are missing images,your story is very interesting and you have some mistakes but the story is really good and i liked that you have a'lot of imagination.